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ICEBREAKER Superior Ninja


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Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 1:52 pm Post subject: What job? |
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I want to be a video game developer here is the story line I am thinking of to make a game about well this would be like something some sort of Narrartor would read at the begging of the game.
When fire blows from the depths of hell it indicates a demon has been created everytime a demon is created a soul from the realm of light is lost each time a soul is lost that means a heart is lost each time a heart is lost hell is one step closer to resarecting their prince,Lucifer.Lucifer died in a war between heaven and hell, a warrior that went by the name of Kratos (Krah-toes) assasinated Lucifer prince of Darkness, Kratos was later consumed by the darkness in his blade he was thought as the reancarnation of Lucifer, the blood that scarred his blade had givin him Lucifer's power now to seal away Lucifer's power's for good he had to slay demons to return the souls of the realm of light that were consumed by hell.
So what do you guys think? remember this like something the narrartor will say in the beggining of the game so? give it a 10-0 scaling for a grade you may also use decimals.(please feel free to post opinions on what you think I should change) _________________

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M.C.E. Superior Ninja


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ICEBREAKER Superior Ninja


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Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 1:56 pm Post subject: |
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what is complicated? _________________
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M.C.E. Superior Ninja


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ICEBREAKER Superior Ninja


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Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 2:09 pm Post subject: |
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I really want to make it like a Ninja Gaiden game thx pleas give it a grading _________________
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Aces_High Dragon Ninja


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Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 2:20 pm Post subject: |
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I think it would do better if the first sentance wasnt a run-on.
And i think you should start small, like a video game tester... like hopefully im going to be someday. One of my friends put me on a list to be employed, hopefully that phone call comes soon... |
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ICEBREAKER Superior Ninja


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Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 2:23 pm Post subject: |
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Well it is a proto-type it's not completed this is like a demo just plz post a rating on what the story sound like.I would give it atleast 7 or 6 out of 10 _________________
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Ryu_Hayabusa Shadow Ninja


Joined: 10 Aug 2005 Posts: 11145 Location: The Netherlands
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Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 2:28 pm Post subject: |
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You should know that developing a game takes a long time. The idea is good, but the development itself will take alot of skill. And forget about making it like Ninja Gaiden for a long time. Start small, and work your way up. For a school project we (my group and I, a total of 6) had to make a simple racegame. 2D first, and then 3D. We had eight weeks. And to give you an indication on what we did in those weeks is simple: lots of planning and lots of programming. My advice is: learn to program in a good language like C++. And when I say learn I mean a few years at least.
My $0.02 _________________
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ICEBREAKER Superior Ninja


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Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 2:32 pm Post subject: |
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I would post of in game graphics but the server is'nt working but again this is only starting words for the Narrarator grade the words not what you think the game is going to be like. _________________
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Ryu_Hayabusa Shadow Ninja


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Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 2:35 pm Post subject: |
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the1/2angelcloud wrote: |
I really want to make it like a Ninja Gaiden game thx pleas give it a grading |
You say it here yourself. And I just give my opinion. Making a game is not easy. And if you read carefully:
Ryu_Hayabusa wrote: |
The idea is good, but the development itself will take alot of skill. |
Although I didn't grade it I said what I thought of it. _________________
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Illmatic Runaway Ninja


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Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 2:40 pm Post subject: |
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the1/2angelcloud wrote: |
I would post of in game graphics but the server is'nt working but again this is only starting words for the Narrarator grade the words not what you think the game is going to be like. |
In game graphics? You've actually started the game?
A short story with pictures. And a functioning video game are two different things. _________________
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Ninjilla Divine Ninja


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Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 2:42 pm Post subject: |
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Developers dont write games stories....cool Idea tho, aulthouhg, how are the demons made? _________________
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Masquito Expert Ninja


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Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 2:54 pm Post subject: |
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i give it a 7.5 _________________
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M.C.E. Superior Ninja


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Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 3:12 pm Post subject: |
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the1/2angelcloud wrote: |
I really want to make it like a Ninja Gaiden game thx pleas give it a grading |
B+, It has the potential of a great game but I thought there should be a littlw more induldgent.
Really great job though, I would love to try it if it ever came out. _________________
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Ninja of Sorrow Dragon Ninja


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Posted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 3:29 pm Post subject: |
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i give it a B
like Ryu_Hayabusa said, you have a good idea for the main start
here's my advice:
first start out small (you did that already)
then when you write scripts make sure you have different outlines and ideas like when you have another good part of the story finished, make another, and another till you think that you are comfortable with your thoughts. Also the reason to do this is because that once you are making the story, you need a plan B, for when you have a mistake in the storyline you got backup writings to make the story have some sense in it
take baby steps _________________
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